So, what
does a veterinarian, a furniture maker, a cold-blooded twin killer, a homeless
boozing druggie, an expert in chaos theory, and a man with a contract out on
his wife have in common? They are all
characters in Dean Koontz’s novel Breathless.
And, they all are part of parallel plot lines.
What are
parallel plot lines? Sometimes a story
may require not just subplots but two or more plot lines that seem to run
parallel. They appear to be separate
stories within the same story.
In Breathless, all the aforementioned
characters are related only by strange, unexplainable happenings in their
lives. The veterinarian encounters a
pasture full of horses in a trance. The
furniture maker encounters two strange white creatures that end up following
him home. A guy murders his twin brother
only to be haunted by bloody hand prints, a bloody pair of gloves that appear
out of nowhere, and a mysterious note that sounds like it could have been
written by his twin that he has just murdered.
The homeless guy has some strange encounters with birds and a pack of
coyotes that protect him from being robbed. The expert in chaos theory wins big in Las
Vegas on every try. The man who hires
another guy to kill his wife has an unusual experience with an unexplainable energy in the woods.
As the story
progresses, the reader is taken on a wild ride of mystery and suspense. Each of the plot lines eventually converge,
some sooner than others, to reveal the source of the unusual happenings.
Parallel
plot lines in some instances can mirror each other as in the story of the Empire Strikes Back. In the first scene,
Han Solo saves Luke Skywalker’s life.
After that, the two split up and go their separate ways. Han goes on to battle Darth Vader and the
evil empire, while Luke goes to another planet for Jedi training with Yoda. The two plot lines remain separate for the
entire story until the end when Luke returns in time to try to save Solo’s life.
However, there are situations in each one that
mirror the other. In one scene Luke
enters a cave where his fear manifests itself as Darth Vader whom his must do
battle with. In another scene Han Solo
flies his ship into what he believes to be a cave only to discover that he has
entered the mouth of a giant galactic worm.
Mirrored
scenes can provide a sense of unity and work the best when the plot splits in
two.
Parallel
plot lines can add depth and intrigue to a novel. Just make sure that if you use them, they
converge seamlessly at the right point or points in your story.
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